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Post by Hannah on Feb 12, 2007 7:06:24 GMT -5
It's about a girl called Raven that ran away from home and a boy called Torin finds her collapsed in the middle of the forest in the snow. He takes her to his house because she is ill but he has to try and hide her from the rest of his family in the house because he wants to look after her, but if his mum and dad knew then he would also get thrown out onto the streets.
Tell me what you think and good critiques would be greatly appreciated! Thanks!
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Post by Hannah on Mar 4, 2007 11:26:41 GMT -5
I've made a website for you to check out
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James
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Coffee Shop To Catwalk Contest Runner
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Post by James on Mar 28, 2007 14:48:30 GMT -5
i love the storie and i really cant wait for the next chapter!
and i love the site
kudos! lol
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Post by Hannah on Mar 30, 2007 10:13:24 GMT -5
Thanks James!
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